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in a moment of childish insurrection, i folded a coin in half. using the godly, hulking, still-sitting vice, i placed the quarter into its cold palms with each turn of the rod, the coin bent. it rotated, the crushing iron force, the vice had no emotion, only strength the coin warped, fighting, a steel bone structure pushing up against the silent jaws. i kept turning, changing that reflection of george washington into an irregular, uneven, foul little thing. it had lost its value, the quarter going from the 'almost half a dollar' state into nothing. a strange, bent, dismembered corpse a serial ****** with the body sent to the state this coin, bent. it had no value a few cents in nickel or copper, (at most) but it didn't have any value before; before it lost its sole purpose, its existence taken in (george washington's) its eye. other than the fact that we gave it what it held important its 'purpose', its 'value' so much for that
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Oct 2, 2018
Oct 2, 2018 at 5:24 PM UTC
the folded quarter
in a moment of childish insurrection, i folded a coin in half. using the godly, hulking, still-sitting vice, i placed the quarter into its cold palms with each turn of the rod, the coin bent. it rotated, the crushing iron force, the vice had no emotion, only strength the coin warped, fighting, a steel bone structure pushing up against the silent jaws. i kept turning, changing that reflection of george washington into an irregular, uneven, foul little thing. it had lost its value, the quarter going from the 'almost half a dollar' state into nothing. a strange, bent, dismembered corpse a serial ****** with the body sent to the state this coin, bent. it had no value a few cents in nickel or copper, (at most) but it didn't have any value before; before it lost its sole purpose, its existence taken in (george washington's) its eye. other than the fact that we gave it what it held important its 'purpose', its 'value' so much for that
nihilistic (unlike critical theory) abt a coin i crushed. true story, ooh gory, too boring
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17/M/waiting for God
Oct 2, 2018
Oct 2, 2018 at 5:24 PM UTC
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