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in a mud pit. around my ankles, saddled, slowly advancing. Moving is a lot of effort. tired, I just want to lie yet and let me sink. low, low, low. more into this swamp. my body becomes numb. extreme pressures, now around my ribs suppress breathing attempts. this mist fills my brain and, I cannot even whisper...
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Oct 1, 2018
Oct 1, 2018 at 7:31 PM UTC
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in a mud pit. around my ankles, saddled, slowly advancing. Moving is a lot of effort. tired, I just want to lie yet and let me sink. low, low, low. more into this swamp. my body becomes numb. extreme pressures, now around my ribs suppress breathing attempts. this mist fills my brain and, I cannot even whisper...
I just want to lie in bed all day. but it only makes things worse.
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Oct 1, 2018
Oct 1, 2018 at 7:31 PM UTC
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