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Quicksand rubs against my ankles, An invisible shackle, That doesn't seem to bother, Anyone else. I only stopped for a second, To catch my breath, To pry deaths hand off my nape, But before I realized, I had sunk to my thighs. My peers continue walking, They don't even look back. Not a single glance as I cry for help. Every birthday, Every deadline, Every opportunity, And I sink deeper, Now it's up to my chest.
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Apr 28
Apr 28, 2026 at 10:54 PM UTC
Struggling Only Makes It Worse
My heart beats louder still, Seconds slip, no words exchanged It's a silent oath whisperd.
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Jan 11, 2025
Jan 11, 2025 at 2:16 AM UTC
About you
No one paid no mind To the tears from this man That land at my feet Creating a quicksand I couldn't slow the rate At which it would expand Leading to the scars At the base of each hand I know what you think of me But this wasn't part of the grand plan I tried and as usual I was not able To help you understand That I just wasn't capable Of being a "real man" ©2024
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Nov 12, 2024
Nov 12, 2024 at 4:23 PM UTC
~•§•~ Ignored Tears ~•§•~
Quicksand foundation Holding on by a strand of frustration I sacrifice that hand, call it a mutation Where will I land? Your guess is as good as my last one, And that wasn't one I could count on ©2024
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Aug 7, 2024
Aug 7, 2024 at 10:15 PM UTC
~•§•~ Predicting the Landing ~•§•~
it didn't sneak up on me i fell slowly with every act of kindness where she'd go out of her way for i could lean on her. she loves me unashamedly. but i was afraid and stuck in quicksand but she pulled me up again and again no matter how many times i mistook the sinking death trap as ground our mutual sacrifice for eachother out of concern, out of care, just because; is what love is
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May 11, 2024
May 11, 2024 at 5:09 AM UTC
slowly
The conversation That I'm havin' With my sin Is frightenin' Acts like a friend Knows the motion It knows when To dig in Where do I end and it begin? Hand in hand We both land In quicksand Like it planned Flames are fanned I'll be ****** Whoop *** canned Right on brand I took a stand and lost command
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Dec 28, 2023
Dec 28, 2023 at 7:06 PM UTC
~•§•~ A Conversation with Sin ~•§•~
The poetry of thoughts shines despite the deceit That lies beyond the kingdom of the forgotten For it is otherwise shackled by the extraneous resolve To bind it to mortal forms with the cross of the sheet And the hammer of the pen. From this mere p*rversion one can't help but marvel At the speed upon which we surrender to defeat And stand ready to relinquish newfound heavens For the sloppy aesthetics of poetry and prose And the fate it can't but meet. For we walk alone on the quicksand of time And it swallows us whole before we dare speak So breathe the fresh air before it goes stale And let every moment be a chance to exist For it is swaying on the edge.
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Jan 7, 2023
Jan 7, 2023 at 3:25 PM UTC
Spelling Spree (2023)
i am trapped. glued to the floor. quicksand around my ankles. enveloping my lungs. can’t breathe. can’t stop. dragging me down to the depths. the depths of inescapable nightmares. tumbling. sinking. begging. screaming ****** ****** sand filling my throat. scratching my esophagus so roughly. clawing at my sensitive skin. scraping my neck. open wounds. hourglass specks falling on top of me. quicksand pulling me under. can’t think. can’t breathe. arms reaching for anything. branches, safety—more sand. bubbling stomach with layers of salty sand. pleading. suffocated by the dust. head underneath. engulfed by the vicious sand. gone.
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Apr 29, 2022
Apr 29, 2022 at 9:09 AM UTC
quicksand
A quicksand cyclones downward at the center, A spiraling hole spun around by the sands that enter, They scratch at the innards of my heart, Pulling everything down and ripping it apart, I’ve tossed so many things at it, But they just drop into this endless pit, Nothing seems to fill it up, Instead everything just gets ****** up, It’s like having my flesh sliced by scattered grains, Spun at high velocity as it sheers against my veins, Carving out tiny wounds accumulate into scars, Blood seeping, lost and disappearing with its cause, Cries are ****** up and then dispersed, Scattered into pieces until it’s no longer heard, Screams are silenced by a ringing vacuum, Run through bleeding veins buried in my womb, It’s like something wants to come up, Like a volcano that’s ready to erupt, Everything that’s been sunk and saturated full, It’s getting ready to finally burst my soul, I didn’t want to shut it all up, It wasn’t my choice to have it all ****** up, I tried so hard to pull it out with my strength, But I underestimated the length of my pain, It’s been loaded and treated with all its vice, So I don’t know how to clean it up nice, I think my exterior is too thick for it to ever explode, But I think that one day, I am going to implode.
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Apr 24, 2021
Apr 24, 2021 at 12:56 AM UTC
Quicksand
She believed herself a solid boulder though as soon as he would hold her, the safety of his gentle touch was home she couldn't help but clutch. She'd dissolve to quicksand at his feet and blow away as he began to sink. She loathed her spirit made of dust, trapped in a mind devoid of trust, but every time she thought of him she'd gain the strength to build again. to show this unsuspecting knight his kiss had sparked her back to life.
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Jan 30, 2021
Jan 30, 2021 at 8:56 PM UTC
Quicksand
Enemy moving in An old friend- Itching under the skin Clawing away at marrow Sleep hollows the mind Blank of reality- Ah, but not a sign Of it making haste anytime soon Isolation known and welcome Familiar as it comes- Although this feeling is all but seldom Paranoia is beginning to show Memory of this wrath Now too real to be past tense- slinking straight down the path Once tread and disrupted Growling straight out of a nightmare Emanating throughout the room- This hunger is constantly aware Though it’s warning is lost to mind Pain is quite the grounder A reminder to keep in time- Stand upright despite the hour Always alert within these confines
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Apr 22, 2020
Apr 22, 2020 at 1:11 PM UTC
Quicksand
even if i had known love has been and always will be quicksand, still i'd jump in it, simply in order to tell you i love you. simply to drown myself looking at you. even if i were to drown again, again, again, again....
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Apr 20, 2020
Apr 20, 2020 at 9:23 AM UTC
again
If I sit still I drown If I move I drown faster You could pull me out If only you weren't The quicksand
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Feb 28, 2020
Feb 28, 2020 at 11:54 AM UTC
Quicksand
I reminisce about the conversations I had yesterday I reminisce about tomorrow, all those obliged conversations I know I won't like I am so nostalgic Why so? Except when everything else is awfully quiet My own knowledge is a self-distraction And no point of views are allowed interjections I reminisce about this melody It always plays out in my head Like a walking party Such a quicksand! The more I move the deeper I sink into myself
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Nov 3, 2019
Nov 3, 2019 at 6:21 AM UTC
Things I know
I wanted a forest fire But our flame was nothing more than a candle Not even a bonfire Short-lived desire You did not hurt me I hurt myself... Walking on a path through quicksand Loving someone who was not available All I can do is to move on Tolerating your face in my surrounding The past has to be left alone And finding someone else to sing along
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Aug 29, 2019
Aug 29, 2019 at 5:03 AM UTC
Move on
This is not refusal of happiness A desperate plea for attention It is a manifest of emotion Not some imaginary invention There is a madness populating my head Billions of shouting ugly voices Every one an echo of my own Spelling my lack of choices Lately hopeless feelings have grown A desolate cold orchard Blossomed a place I belong I'm welcome but also tortured I have laid down my roots in quicksand I'll be withered by afternoon A pile of wilted petals Unless I am picked by someone soon
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Mar 27, 2019
Mar 27, 2019 at 7:17 PM UTC
Manifest Of Emotion
They made me worry about quicksand a lot as a kid. Giving me little bits of advice to keep in mind: Don't move too much you'll go down faster! If you're stuck just hold onto something! As if it really was an all too common problem in the stale suburbs. But I realize now quicksand isn't just one thing. It has many different names. Don't let it swallow you up! Just ask for help! How do I do that? I tried to hang on and not let it consume me, But here I am, drowning in quicksand.
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Feb 8, 2019
Feb 8, 2019 at 11:58 AM UTC
Quicksand
I am feeling stuck Like I’m drowning in quicksand Struggling to be free
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Jan 21, 2019
Jan 21, 2019 at 10:56 PM UTC
Quicksand
Stand still I feel myself sinking And inside I’m thinking That each movement I’m making Is pulling me deeper Stand still Focus on what you say Always be sure to convey Emotional and fervency, there’s no time to waste Our lives are at stake Stand still I can feel every breath Pulse thumping closer to death Wondering where we went wrong in the right And if your lovely eyes will again see the sunlight Stand still Capture this moment please Sinking beyond the knees Torso receding as I hold close to you Wondering when the sinking will be through Stand still Take the deepest of breaths I can see you’re scared to death Hold closer to me as we are swallowed whole And may God rest our soul Forever standing Still
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Oct 29, 2018
Oct 29, 2018 at 4:31 PM UTC
Quicksand
in a mud pit. around my ankles, saddled, slowly advancing. Moving is a lot of effort. tired, I just want to lie yet and let me sink. low, low, low. more into this swamp. my body becomes numb. extreme pressures, now around my ribs suppress breathing attempts. this mist fills my brain and, I cannot even whisper...
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Oct 1, 2018
Oct 1, 2018 at 7:31 PM UTC
quicksand