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the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise crucified crucified by the venom of a viper's bite crucified crucified there wasn't any scrap of respite crucified crucified in a rancorous mean spite the pack of detractors wanted the dyad beaten down so they served up a caustic vitriol to claim an undeserved crown crucified crucified savage the meter's punishment crucified crucified ever vile this scathing torment crucified crucified none being fair in treatment the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise
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Jul 6, 2018
Jul 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM UTC
Crucified
the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise crucified crucified by the venom of a viper's bite crucified crucified there wasn't any scrap of respite crucified crucified in a rancorous mean spite the pack of detractors wanted the dyad beaten down so they served up a caustic vitriol to claim an undeserved crown crucified crucified savage the meter's punishment crucified crucified ever vile this scathing torment crucified crucified none being fair in treatment the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise
NB: I've used the poetic device of repetition in the piece.
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ElizabethSquires
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ElizabethSquires
Australian
Jul 6, 2018
Jul 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM UTC
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