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#scathing
You’ve got a city pass in City of Uncertain Love, walked through the door, didn’t so much as flinch, even after all the plasma drawn from this love, you walked away hissing, bared sharp fangs, jaundiced from all the scathing words that flowed, pale as a vampire, it was you after all and not me you said. Enamored with the sights and sound, the 360 degree dining experience with a view of the future, complemented with vocabularies to match your mood, aged like wine in the vineyard of pick-up lines, while I’m left here in a curiosity shop of brokenness: kisses spat back into the bottomless void of yesterday; thoughts of once newly-minted strangers we were scrawling notes and now smeared by tear stains; a heart with no discernible shape, slapped for dragging beats on the snare; A corpse of a phone you have murdered taking it off life support when you eloped with my charger; mismatched pillows you left, still possessed with the ghosts of restlessness nights haunting the halls of my mind with echoing arguments of what to eat for dinner; a spare key—a wedding ring for a keychain. I fell apart. Ring!Ring!Ring! “So, everything didn’t work out for you?” —inaudible— “Do you know what time is?” —inaudible— —you missed me?” —inaudible— “Uh-huh…. Sorry to hear, but there are no refunds for your freedom ticket. Bye!” Click!
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Sep 17, 2024
Sep 17, 2024 at 11:21 PM UTC
Refund
the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise crucified crucified by the venom of a viper's bite crucified crucified there wasn't any scrap of respite crucified crucified in a rancorous mean spite the pack of detractors wanted the dyad beaten down so they served up a caustic vitriol to claim an undeserved crown crucified crucified savage the meter's punishment crucified crucified ever vile this scathing torment crucified crucified none being fair in treatment the cross of the critics nailed the duo with a despise they showed no mercy for the pair's demise
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Jul 6, 2018
Jul 6, 2018 at 7:26 AM UTC
Crucified