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Unaware of you at first You      Crept                 Upon me And strike ..... Weeping Winding me instantly     Unable to account for the cause Polluting and heavy Once started         It spreads through me      Overwhelming me      Tired and defeated      Mocked of pride      Put in place and offended      But deserved ??      self guilt and doubt stirring                                       an ocean ..... a bottomless pit Dragged up and upheaved To cut the surface sharp and wounded Still raw and open Unrealised ....           And ...... unaddressed Get back down .... now go Sink & Rest (C) Ashley Kane FB
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Mar 13, 2018
Mar 13, 2018 at 1:58 PM UTC
Sadness
Unaware of you at first You      Crept                 Upon me And strike ..... Weeping Winding me instantly     Unable to account for the cause Polluting and heavy Once started         It spreads through me      Overwhelming me      Tired and defeated      Mocked of pride      Put in place and offended      But deserved ??      self guilt and doubt stirring                                       an ocean ..... a bottomless pit Dragged up and upheaved To cut the surface sharp and wounded Still raw and open Unrealised ....           And ...... unaddressed Get back down .... now go Sink & Rest (C) Ashley Kane FB
A poem about a sad memory striking is forgotton about at the wrong time and place
#family#sad#sadness#memory#depth#ocean#guilt
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34/F/Birmingham
Mar 13, 2018
Mar 13, 2018 at 1:58 PM UTC
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