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You hide yourself in us so beautifully No one notices that you are within us You take over when 1 is feeling sad also when one is very happy I sit in my comfortable corner and wonder What is your aim.... It is to be recognised, acknowledged and accepted And if this above mentioned are done Will you stop your ways of increasing the pressure You get me thinking hard without any lead Without anylead to your aim I must say I think your main aim is to destroy lives Is to end lives Your way of winning is a corpse in a grave That is your accomplishment I know you... i know you on a personal point of view You take over a life A life that end in loosing interest in life all together 1 becomes new to themselves 1 thrives to find new ways to be happy in life but not too happy you(depreciation) don't aprove It annoyes and irritates me the fact that you want more You want more than you take/took You specifically want a life You want once precious life I don't think I will allow you to do that No I refuse to let it be You taking over 1ns being  and their life No you cannot Accepting you in us might be the only The only weapon will use to defeat you So I think
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Sep 11, 2017
Sep 11, 2017 at 1:03 PM UTC
Depression
You hide yourself in us so beautifully No one notices that you are within us You take over when 1 is feeling sad also when one is very happy I sit in my comfortable corner and wonder What is your aim.... It is to be recognised, acknowledged and accepted And if this above mentioned are done Will you stop your ways of increasing the pressure You get me thinking hard without any lead Without anylead to your aim I must say I think your main aim is to destroy lives Is to end lives Your way of winning is a corpse in a grave That is your accomplishment I know you... i know you on a personal point of view You take over a life A life that end in loosing interest in life all together 1 becomes new to themselves 1 thrives to find new ways to be happy in life but not too happy you(depreciation) don't aprove It annoyes and irritates me the fact that you want more You want more than you take/took You specifically want a life You want once precious life I don't think I will allow you to do that No I refuse to let it be You taking over 1ns being  and their life No you cannot Accepting you in us might be the only The only weapon will use to defeat you So I think
20170911 19:03
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30/Other/South Africa
Sep 11, 2017
Sep 11, 2017 at 1:03 PM UTC
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