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at some point in time you saved my life. you thought I was worth something and you promised you'd help me. a few months later, I feel your calloused hands on top of my own; helping me holding a gun below my chin I see your shadow behind my body; creeping into my skin and taking over any light that had once existed I hear your soothing voice and steady heartbeat; I'm home right? you always promised you'd be my home. but you're killing me now why are you killing me? I tried to let go of that gun long ago but now you're sitting here sending me sweet nothings, easing my mind so i'll pull that **** trigger everything changed between us months ago, all you do now is hover in front of me, like a ghost plotting revenge against it's murderer *you said "I love you too **** much."* I'm screaming, everything is becoming dark and the pain has become too much so you pull the trigger. you're yelling "this is it. *this is the last ******* time."* you had your eyes closed you said "i never loved you, I never even tried to."
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Jun 28, 2016
Jun 28, 2016 at 2:46 AM UTC
The Death of Me
at some point in time you saved my life. you thought I was worth something and you promised you'd help me. a few months later, I feel your calloused hands on top of my own; helping me holding a gun below my chin I see your shadow behind my body; creeping into my skin and taking over any light that had once existed I hear your soothing voice and steady heartbeat; I'm home right? you always promised you'd be my home. but you're killing me now why are you killing me? I tried to let go of that gun long ago but now you're sitting here sending me sweet nothings, easing my mind so i'll pull that **** trigger everything changed between us months ago, all you do now is hover in front of me, like a ghost plotting revenge against it's murderer *you said "I love you too **** much."* I'm screaming, everything is becoming dark and the pain has become too much so you pull the trigger. you're yelling "this is it. *this is the last ******* time."* you had your eyes closed you said "i never loved you, I never even tried to."
can I have feedback on this one? it's really personal and id like to make it even better
briannanana
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Jun 28, 2016
Jun 28, 2016 at 2:46 AM UTC
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