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man, she used to hold me like a hurt child, and tell me that everything would be so okay, man, she loved me so far, and when my darkest, she took my heart away with a single kiss of her mouth man, she punched my pain and make me feel flowers, like I was in love of her beautiful smile man, she is still everything, I don't want to let her go or make her unhappy, not anymore, not that but, dude, she is flying, and I was just some weight she kept carrying without making any sense
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Mar 3, 2016
Mar 3, 2016 at 8:14 PM UTC
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man, she used to hold me like a hurt child, and tell me that everything would be so okay, man, she loved me so far, and when my darkest, she took my heart away with a single kiss of her mouth man, she punched my pain and make me feel flowers, like I was in love of her beautiful smile man, she is still everything, I don't want to let her go or make her unhappy, not anymore, not that but, dude, she is flying, and I was just some weight she kept carrying without making any sense
hm, I guess this is based on "'Tis a Pity She Was a ***** by David Bowie
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Mar 3, 2016 at 8:14 PM UTC
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