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a great whale breaches "man-watching" the pacific stirs
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Jan 16, 2016
Jan 16, 2016 at 9:25 AM UTC
Haiku (Lune 5-3-5)
a great whale breaches "man-watching" the pacific stirs
This is a Lune devised by poet Robert Kelly. You are restricted to 13 syllables 5/3/5 in his attempt to tighten the Haiku format in English
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Jan 16, 2016
Jan 16, 2016 at 9:25 AM UTC
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