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You seemed so amazing But I only got a taste I am sorry for ever trying I am sorry for ever pushing You felt so amazing With all your numbing qualities You were always there to save me You were always there to hold me But now I see you were setting me up for failure But that is okay now I know I shouldn't, but I forgive you I know I shouldn't, but I still love you
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Jan 10, 2016
Jan 10, 2016 at 2:15 PM UTC
NYPC #21
You seemed so amazing But I only got a taste I am sorry for ever trying I am sorry for ever pushing You felt so amazing With all your numbing qualities You were always there to save me You were always there to hold me But now I see you were setting me up for failure But that is okay now I know I shouldn't, but I forgive you I know I shouldn't, but I still love you
Write an elegy for something you've happily let go this year. For example, I stopped drinking soda in July (I still miss it), and I stopped thinking I would eventually enjoy exercise (I still exercise; I've simply accepted that I'll never, ever, ever like it.)
#sad#lost#friend#bad#nypc
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Jan 10, 2016
Jan 10, 2016 at 2:15 PM UTC
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