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Rain t r i c k l e s              d o     w n the gutters into the small p u d d l e collecting         below, *drip, drip, drip, plop, plop, plop,* water       into the falls        puddle, splashing onto your stationary         sneakers. can’t make yourself M O V E [out] of the r   i       a  n. because you can’t tell the difFerence b e t w e e n the t e     a r     s from the clouds and the t          e     a r                     s from your eyes.
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Oct 20, 2015
Oct 20, 2015 at 8:11 AM UTC
Rain
Rain t r i c k l e s              d o     w n the gutters into the small p u d d l e collecting         below, *drip, drip, drip, plop, plop, plop,* water       into the falls        puddle, splashing onto your stationary         sneakers. can’t make yourself M O V E [out] of the r   i       a  n. because you can’t tell the difFerence b e t w e e n the t e     a r     s from the clouds and the t          e     a r                     s from your eyes.
it ruined the shape of my poem, and i can't seem to change it. Maybe I'll try fixing it again some other time.
LifelessKnights
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Oct 20, 2015
Oct 20, 2015 at 8:11 AM UTC
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