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AWESOME Excited about our vacation We knew it was going to cost some But since it was to Hawaii We were sure it would be awesome. We went whale watching And guess what, we saw some. They were leaping up high Out of the water, it was awesome. The captain shared his tobacco. I had always wanted to chaw some. I hated the taste, but he didn’t. He really believed it was awesome. We went through a garden And looked at each blossom. They were beautiful to see The colors were pretty awesome. And the hospitality staff too, We didn’t even have to boss ‘em. They anticipated our wishes They were all totally awesome. We ended the trip with snacks And we couldn’t wait to go nosh ‘em. They call snacks pupus in Hawaii. What can I say? Sort of awesome! Brent Kincaid 4/6/2015
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 6:26 AM UTC
AWESOME
AWESOME Excited about our vacation We knew it was going to cost some But since it was to Hawaii We were sure it would be awesome. We went whale watching And guess what, we saw some. They were leaping up high Out of the water, it was awesome. The captain shared his tobacco. I had always wanted to chaw some. I hated the taste, but he didn’t. He really believed it was awesome. We went through a garden And looked at each blossom. They were beautiful to see The colors were pretty awesome. And the hospitality staff too, We didn’t even have to boss ‘em. They anticipated our wishes They were all totally awesome. We ended the trip with snacks And we couldn’t wait to go nosh ‘em. They call snacks pupus in Hawaii. What can I say? Sort of awesome! Brent Kincaid 4/6/2015
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Apr 6, 2015
Apr 6, 2015 at 6:26 AM UTC
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