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Breaking down in pools of water which surround me, envelop me I am immersed In a world tinted blue Underwater… Under pressure Bubbles play around me Tempting but untouchable For fear of fingerprints that pop Bubbles are unreliable Hold my hand and hold me down Let me go and let me rise Up Up Up to the top To the surface…. well, almost Foot neatly caught In weeds too strong to snap But maybe thats good Maybe the surface is too real… too tangible Maybe it’s safer here In my world tinted blue Maybe it’s safer here… Breaking down in pools of water
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Mar 18, 2015
Mar 18, 2015 at 11:29 AM UTC
The Break Down
Breaking down in pools of water which surround me, envelop me I am immersed In a world tinted blue Underwater… Under pressure Bubbles play around me Tempting but untouchable For fear of fingerprints that pop Bubbles are unreliable Hold my hand and hold me down Let me go and let me rise Up Up Up to the top To the surface…. well, almost Foot neatly caught In weeds too strong to snap But maybe thats good Maybe the surface is too real… too tangible Maybe it’s safer here In my world tinted blue Maybe it’s safer here… Breaking down in pools of water
charlotte-emma-lewis
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Mar 18, 2015
Mar 18, 2015 at 11:29 AM UTC
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