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a breaking point everyone has one, right? a place where they can't go on without an explosion of emotion or just quitting all together but where is mine? where is my stopping point? where i can rest my eyes and feel ease a point where i do break and get everything out because to get better you have to break, right? maybe that point has left out forgotten by a god i dont believe in leaving me in a constant hurt a never ending cycle of being left with no escape or coping where is my breaking point? it must be sad to read about someone who wants to break down who wants to feel all the pain he has experienced at once just so one thing can maybe last just so some other emotion that isnt a deep depression can be felt for more than an hour or so maybe i need to make my own point need to scrape some time out of my schedule to let myself explode let it out get rid of the space it takes up so i can leave some for anything else but thats not how it works it comes on its own time like a bird to its feeder or death to take a soul maybe my breaking point will take its time so slow its taking parts of me as i try to survive maybe my breaking point will be death that when my blood pools out of my body those deep dark emotions will flow out with it no longer carried by me but the mortal body that is left here leaving my soul the lightest of them all a breaking point no one said that it has to happen when youre alive
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Jan 27, 2017
Jan 27, 2017 at 11:34 PM UTC
a breaking point
Breaking down in pools of water which surround me, envelop me I am immersed In a world tinted blue Underwater… Under pressure Bubbles play around me Tempting but untouchable For fear of fingerprints that pop Bubbles are unreliable Hold my hand and hold me down Let me go and let me rise Up Up Up to the top To the surface…. well, almost Foot neatly caught In weeds too strong to snap But maybe thats good Maybe the surface is too real… too tangible Maybe it’s safer here In my world tinted blue Maybe it’s safer here… Breaking down in pools of water
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Mar 18, 2015
Mar 18, 2015 at 11:29 AM UTC
The Break Down
all of these memories keep your feet on the ground they stop you from running away they keep you safe and sound all of these memories remind you of yesterday they keep you safe by keeping your demons away all of these memories hide your mistakes from the light they stop all the whispers they know how to hold you right all of these memories bring light into your life they keep bad spirits in the shadows they keep you away from strife all of these memories are good at lying to you they're breaking down because that's just what memories do.
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Jul 14, 2014
Jul 14, 2014 at 4:50 AM UTC
What Memories Do
i think i forgot my place in the universe happiness is fleeting and i knew that once so why do i chase after things that are finite? why do i conquer and destroy everything in my path? the world is supposed to be easy for the taking but the world is taking me i overdose on everything i've never known when enough is enough gluttony, lust, rage the trifecta rule i always break everyone is wrapped up in their own universe struggling with their own problems so why do i expect someone to save me
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Feb 22, 2018
Feb 22, 2018 at 10:15 PM UTC
typing out loud