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In fields once gray, 12 pieces gathering

In this mountaining valley we are one So let us watch this birthing sun It starts small but enthusiastic It grows and consumes. We feed it daily and admire its growth How are you today my flower? we ask I'm fukken great is its response It grows more on some days And it barely eats on others Sometimes we don't feed it, our lives too busy But our sun is always shining. The beauty of it has caught attention Our smiles known when we feed it those around us smile too With this writing I prepare a meal, our love burns all the brighter.
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