When you looked at me The fire of your eyes created Deep waves in the sea of my soul I am drowning deeper and deeper In the wide ocean of infinite love These eyes,these beautiful eyes Made me see deep in the ocean And imbibe wisdom from the sky These eyes,these beautiful eyes Painted kindness on my mind; And inscribed love on my heart These eyes,these beautiful eyes More beautiful than the starry night More sweet than the moonbeam kiss More kind than fragrance of perfumed garden These eyes,these beautiful eyes Marilyn Ann Francis Beautiful....EXCELLENT...MAF Angela Davis Natasha Nabokov Thank you, poets, you make my day Natasha Nabokov It's such a memorable poem, Matloob. Thank you Wow, Matloob, you should post your work in FM Online Magazine, I know that the editor would publish it! Michele Vizzotti-White Writing about eyes is such a great idea and u do it so beautifuly, u go on from the appearance to the way they make one feel in few but rich words, my fav line is the painted kindness in my mind eyes tell so much yet i have not read many poems about them Saalik Siddiqui Fantastic indeed. Demelia Denton Another beautiful poem Matloob Melanie Bingham Chapman very, very nicely written ! Natasha Nabokov Oh, you are so magnificently productive Larry Barmash What would you do if I sang out a tune