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Bruce Dillon
Poems
Sep 2014
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As i walked the shore at morning tide a shining pebble caught my eye the sun awakened the morning view i looked to see that sparkling gem was you
I didn't luke the finish and fixed it up but maybe ruined it? to wordy that's better i thinnk always keep word.count doun say more.wifh less
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Bruce Dillon
Heyburn Idaho
(Heyburn Idaho)
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