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Aug 2014
Once i rise,
i hope i make things better for my mother and brothers
cause God knows we struggled to long
but no matter what happened we stayed strong
even if things have gotta worse for my mother
As your first son i still treat you like any other
Once i rise,
i hope i make a good living for me and my girl
cause when nobody was there when i was down
i had her in my world
Once i rise,
i hope i can make all my hatters mad
cause every since i was younger they tried to make things bad
Once i rise,
i can finally show the world who i truly am
show others who struggle that someone understands
you talking to a guy who grew up with not to many friends
cause people i considered as friends were enemies
that must showed why a lot of them envy me
Once i rise,
i ll finally let you all see
why real,loving,caring,trustworthy,and loyal
are definitions of me
cause even for a guy who was quiet in school
A lot of people still love me as a friend today
and the only reason i unleash these inner thoughts into the world
Cause i feel more of a man today
YoungGentleman17
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YoungGentleman17  Millington T.N
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