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WHERE I WANT TO BE

Pizza stains stain her rusty old books;

pages dog-eared and smelling like coffee dates and drags of a stale cigarette, she wishes for late night walks and New York subway rides, the green-blue hue of the underground’s lights swirl by like she was casted in an independent movie film filled with drunken stupors and graffiti-filled alleyways.

 

He walks back to her creaky-old apartment, her college literature class starting at 8:30am tomorrow yet he persists in walking back to her creaky-old apartment, green flannel catches her apartment's door with the broken lock, his beer-induced thoughts infused with the idea of her in his green flannel, laying on a sofa that’s 70% fluff and 20% couch;

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Written by
modelb0nes
Canadian
Published
Aug 17, 2014
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3·114
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I made this up while restlessly thinking about the movie Remember Me with Robert Pattinson.

I can't finish it. But maybe some things aren't meant to be finished?

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