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Oceanic Crossing

My brow furrowed as she read my palm

and whispered of growing interest.

"What?" I asked; I had my qualms

about the foretelling of a future

I haven't decided to live.

But I smell the darkness in the incense.

 

I trace the tendrils of the incense

with forehead firmly within my palm.

The streets below are live

with persons of little interest,

hustling toward a fuller future.

Renew me, my qualms.

 

Not that I had qualms,

banana-flavored incense

replacing patois in my future.

The lurid waves slide over my palm.

instill a touch of colder interest.

With each sandy step, I live.

 

And as the water fills my shoes, I live.

When I quietly lose interest

the ocean shows it too has qualms.

The brine coalesces like incense

as my nails dig into the skin of my palm.

For I seek a better future

 

than the unforgiving future

that chose not to live.

The salt stings the holes in my palm

and instantly I have no qualms,

just a lingering fleck of incense

arousing mild interest.

 

The ocean betrayed not the slightest interest

being the shepherd of my future.

Rivulets of water became the incense

That I would breathe to live.

Instinct expressed fervent qualms,

as I pressed my mouth with my open palm.

 

It was the incense in which I held the most interest.

Her finger traced my palm, mumbling of a better future

ahead for me to live, free from petty qualms.

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Nov 25, 2010
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