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Rachel Peterson
Poems
Jun 2014
Vortex
We were in a whirl
A vortex
A spiral
A roller coaster i saw going up
But everyone else saw going down
We grew closer
Everything between us shared
When suddenly we took a plunge
His friends took his sense
And he lost respect
For he had dropped me
Drowned me in the hate of the world
Ditched me like a childish dream
Our friendship had ended,
We are yet to talk.
I don't know what he thinks
And vice to his versa.
I have cried over the loss
But the time has come to move on
To gain strength
And hope
For we need to prepare.
Because the vortex of life-
It only goes down my dear
#vortex
Written by
Rachel Peterson
New York
(New York)
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