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Sandcastle

I fell in love

with a sandcastle

and when the tide came

and washed you away

I let my body drift out to sea

prayed I would disintegrate

piece by piece, particle by particle

with  yours

but I'm not like you

made of sand

my moats were useless

against waves

 

have you ever tried to capture a wave inside of a bucket?

 

that's what it was like

to love her

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Dec 5, 2014
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