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she was sophisticated and cultured, but you, you made her naive. in the same fashion, you stripped her of her innocence, and she became a mouse lost in a maze. this aroma is intoxicating making her thoughts clouded. she knew it was wrong. she knew it wouldn't work. she knew it would leave her empty. but yet she let the walls of the sand castle crumble from these crashing waves. your glass of deception is half-full, but a haze of hesitation and obscurity is released as the glass shatters to the floor. it is leaving you dry. it is leaving her faded. you are the kid with the magnifying glass, and she is neglected like your childhood teddy bear. but she will accept these roles in the play, fully aware that this is the director's finest. and she will exit stage left while you grace the center and receive a standing ovation.
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Oct 31, 2010
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