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feeling

by rachel-redwine

Blood shot eyes and curbside appeal dress me up to fake real, Find me in your photograph and i'm crying, while your laughing I really do wish I could... I wish I could cause I really would, take you over, take you down Then leave you.. southern bound. Would it be better for us too, to take the letter that life refused to hold together the breaking news, I'll do what you say so.. cause I'm a feeling that no body cares for. Traumatized this is so unreal laughing with the daffodils making love where the king sat in I'm turned on by your old fashion I really do wish I could, I wish I could cause I really would. Turn you over, take you down you ain't nothing but a blood hound wouldn't it be better for us two, to take the letter that life refused to hold together the breaking news, I'll do what you say so... cause I'm a feeling that no body cares for.
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rachel-redwine
Published
Apr 20, 2014
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#love#lonely#alone#fake#crying#in#strength#feeling#laughing#fit
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