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Fatal Bang

The bullet is cold And sits heavy in my hand No need to etch your name Since you're the problem at hand The metal rolls through my fingers Just like the thoughts through my head So icy and cruel with a vicious intent Tormenting, all the lies that were said But even worse were the truths That so harshly were fed It's been to my fortune That you never have seen All of these tears That I continually bleed All that I want Is for you to see Every one of my weaknesses And every part of me But you unlike the bullet Never wanted to see Anything more Than the outside of me My physical beauty Outnumbered by flaws Once I looked in the mirror And what did I see A perfect porcelain doll Staring back at me But like a rock to a window Were your words to my heart And I watched myself shatter I just fell apart You've just absolutely killed Inside your shining star So blinded by your thoughts No one knows who you are I tried to find out But I wasn't strong enough to stay Now both of us are miserable And I don't know what to say So now I'll solve both our problems With one single shot A toast to no more pain A toast to no more drama Another for no more sin And again for no more trauma Now forever in your head A thought like a fang Forever you will hear That last fatal BANG
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vande-barringer
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Oct 9, 2010
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I was a very distraught youth. I still love this poem though

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