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Oct 2010
W
The corridor is empty
Walking foward
Empty
Stagering
In the dark moisture
Of the hallway
Humidity's a killer, they say
Well, who the **** are they?
The ones who brought you here?
Haunted.
written 8/10/10
quite honestly i was completely ****** when i wrote this. i have no clue why i wrote "W" as the first line
i hate that i go from using no punctuation to to much.
critiqing would be greatly appreciated
Erica Jane Kay
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