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Erica Jane Kay Mar 2011
Something in the scheme of the world is off
I can tell by the look in your eyes
The tilt of the axis is a little awry
And I wish I could tell you why

Things are different
Between us
Between them
I cant tell you when
Or if
I want this to end

I'm reluctant to admit
I wish now was back then
Even if I didn't have as many friends

I give you
What you need
To go out and be
And guess what
Babe
They like you more than they like me
written 2/15/11
not sure how i feel about this. its quite broken up, sometimes the stanzas feel almost like seperate poems
Erica Jane Kay Mar 2011
This isn't my life
This fake reality i'm living through
It isn't right
It isn't how it's supposed to be
Right now i live with you and me
I'm not lucky enough to say an "us" exists
Like it did in my life
But that's just on pause
For now i'm stuck in this fake reality
I can't wait to get back to life with you
written 10/16/10
not sure how i feel about this...dont think im a fan
Erica Jane Kay Oct 2010
You know just what to say
To ruin my whole ******* day
No chance you'd try to make me feel better

You really dont care

You wont even dare
To let your mind wander
In my direction
You'd rather drown yourself
In poison
written 10/16/10
crap just like everything else ive ever written
Erica Jane Kay Oct 2010
Things feel better
But probably not for long
I just want all of you
For all of me
Baby, is that so wrong?
I've become accustumed to you
And whats worse,
I need you too
But baby,
Is that so wrong?
written 10/11/10
i dont think im a huge fan, but i havent written in a little bit and it just came to my head so i figured id jot it down.
thoughts on it would be lovely.
Erica Jane Kay Oct 2010
Nothing's going right in my life
Things took a turn for the worse

The fact that I still love you
Or how you no longer love me
I dont know which is worse

When you were here
I loved my life
Everything was perfect

Now that you're gone
I've got nothing to live for

Nothing is worth it
Nothing i do feels right

I hate
The past because I hate
That things have changed
written 10/3/10
i reallyyyyy dont know how i feel about this one.
i messed around with line breaks and stanzas and such.
please give me a hand on making this better.
Erica Jane Kay Oct 2010
Someone preform a labodomy
I don't want to remember you and me
I used to be so happy
But now I'm just in pain
The comparison and change is a ridiculous thing
What does one do
When the one you love
Decides they dont want you?
What am I expected to do?

Things have changed
You dont feel the same
And you don't even wish you do
I guess im gonna have to relearn
How to live my life without you
written 10/12/10
its really choppy. i like it, but i wish it could go smoother.
any suggestions?
Erica Jane Kay Oct 2010
W
The corridor is empty
Walking foward
Empty
Stagering
In the dark moisture
Of the hallway
Humidity's a killer, they say
Well, who the **** are they?
The ones who brought you here?
Haunted.
written 8/10/10
quite honestly i was completely ****** when i wrote this. i have no clue why i wrote "W" as the first line
i hate that i go from using no punctuation to to much.
critiqing would be greatly appreciated
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