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Feb 2014
I am the master of any domain
all is heard, that I proclaim
Holding control, serenity and grace
whilst daring my trial face to face
my words heard, every story told
may the will of this man, never fold
the only thing that can make my will break
is a cruel twist, within thy loves fate.
First poem, intense I know, but I think it is a good first. I like to write poetry with rhyme... Hi open to all sorts of criticism
Marcus LaFleche
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