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Feb 2014
Here I am with pen in hand,
And there you are without a clue.
And I can’t believe I’m lame enough
To write poetry about you.

I have so many thoughts you’ll never know;
There are so many places we’ll never go…
But I can’t get you off my mind,
So please, please don’t say ‘no’…
First poem I've ever shared; constructive criticism is welcome! (Although try to be nice.) I've joined this site to improve my writing, maybe some of you can help :)
Shannon Leigh
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