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Jan 2014
Our
         love
          was
       a hand
      grenade.
   You pulled
      the pin.
Might elaborate on this idea a little bit for a future poem. A little cliché never killed anybody (at least I hope not. What a sad way to go).
*Update*: I made it a visual poem. But if it looks dumb, let me know and I'll probably change it back.
Daniel Samuelson
Written by
Daniel Samuelson  California
(California)   
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