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Deer Death

I need a sharp

paper-thin

note.

 

Stretched     taught

and dried

eyes staring.

 

Feathers

Dipped in red

and put to parchment.

 

A bird's surprise

to carry a message

a call.

 

A warning to flee,

now fly,

and bring the men galloping.

 

Escape

was a factor

A pipe dream unfair.

 

To trumpet's song,

and ****** battlefields

bathed, enriched

in history.

 

To be told

and retold.

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Written by
icarus-m
25
Published
Jan 20, 2014
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24·63
Notes

I just wrote. I didn't read it, didn't think about the whole. Just stanza by stanza, so it's probably pretty terrible right now. And now the title. But I don't recall what exactly I just wrote. So, I guess I will call it "Deer Death." As my own double meaning, play on words, with visualization that doesn't quite make sense. You don't have the full picture, but feel free to fill in, and color your own into my words.

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