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The Lonely Castle

I tried to get into your house, (more like a castle really) For three years. For the first year I knocked on your door, And beat at your gate. For the second year I waited outside, Contentedly, assuredly. By the third year I was ready to leave, Angry with myself. But as I packed up, You called out, And let me in. We sat and talked, or walked. You showed me everything I wanted to see, Gave me everything I wanted, and more. In your castle. For a while things were great, The years before were minutes. But then the castle scared you. It scared me too. You wanted to leave, and I watched, As you cried out windows and beat at the walls. I had only just gotten here. Then one day you tried to leave, And I stopped you. So what now? You are still stuck in your castle, and I there too. Though not stuck, I want to be with you. I wonder should I have just gone home, And built a castle of my own. But no. I will leave this castle, and you will come too. It may take three more years, And another three, and another. But however we get there, I am no longer I, And you no longer you. My friend.
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