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His Smile

His smile made it all ok

His charred flesh didn’t matter

I didn’t see the scars

His eyes no longer danced

Nor did they see me at all

 

But his smile made it all ok

 

His soul was full of hate

He hardly spoke to me

But on the scarce occasion

 

His smile made it all ok

 

He could no longer walk

And didn’t want kids

So they wouldn’t be ashamed

Of their crippled father

I agreed wishing I hadn’t

But he hugged me

And thanked me

And smiled

 

And his smile made it all ok

 

And years went on

And we never had kids

We never went to a graduation

Or a class play

We never got mother’s day gifts

But over the years he smiled more

 

And his smile made everything ok

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Written by
victoria-erausquin
American
Published
Sep 6, 2010
Lines·Words
26·134
Notes

Basically this is based after a fire that almost took this girl's husband's life. It's not very good, but I wrote a short story similar and a lot of people liked it.

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