I’m now at a point where most poems go through multiple drafts
Orikaeshi Tanren wordcraft
Layer on layer of editing
Pressed together
Heated
Cooled
Heated again
Tempered
Folded transversely and longitudinally

But understand: still crude and juvenile!!
..so that these verses be misconstrued as self-adulation.
One day,
……perhaps…..
Efforts will result in the production of a
Single
Razor sharp
Literary effort.