Man argue, Did Eve eat an apple or piece of fruit
This point is so insignificant minuscule minuet
The bigger picture’s concept is what’s resolute
Enticing Eve Was it a Serpent or an Evil Man?
I question Who put the Apple in Eve’s hand
In the beginning their were three
Adam Eve and Abel, their firstborn son
Before the first ****** committed done
A mother‘s worries grief for her two sons begu
Cain killed Abel neither brother won
People remark today society is so bad
Evil growing people knowing , tragic and sad
Evil born from the beginning of time
From the very first violant crime
The seed planted for eternity in man’s mind
Satan‘s wish to expedite granted his rein on earth
God gave Satan a wide birth
rebellion upheaval in heaven angels sided
Satan convinced angels Uncertainty, collided
An Army of minions created for Satan delighted
In the end ultimate cost Eden Paradise Lost
The path to Eden Shangri-La closed
Consequences of actions chose
Satan to The face of God opposed
No more milk and honey tranquility, they know
Adam, learned how by the sweat of his brow
He shall toil the soil life difficult extremely hard
His relationship with God distant marred
Eve will experience increased pain in childbirth
they learned their choices can make life worse
The first encounter of Satan’s manipulation
Changed the purpose of the whole creation
God let man decide free will good vs evil
Satan’s evil seed grows greater upheaval
People could determine their fate retrieval
A chance to regain God’s Grace reprieveal
The wrath of God cuts deep
God‘s word in our hearts we shall keep
The greatest accomplishment Satan has achieved
Convincing man, believe he does not exist
Creating doubt, man deceived ignorant bliss.
Inspired songs
1) where have all the flowers gone
(anti war song)1955 By Pete Seeger
This song is why all the Flowers children used to be at the airport waiting for the soldiers to return and handing out flowers, holding peace, signs, and love ❤️
(2) The age of Aquarius/ let the Sunshine in 1969
By the fifth dimension
originally written for the 1967 Broadway musical hair, The 5th Dimension Melody spent six weeks at number one on the billboard hot 100 won a 1970 Grammy award for record of the year
A shift in society Significant meaning
Celebration the astrological belief that humanity was transcending into a new era of love and peace, and enlightenment, serving as a rally call cry for the 1960s hippie and anti-war movement (flower child)
3) hot child in the city By Nick Gilder 1977
A tribute to the runaway children younger and younger we see ********** to survive the street
This is where our society is today. To sell exploit **** children, and turn their heads away
Our society is so far removed from compassion
And caring We are the ultimate paradise lost our children are the cost
Footnotes
My poem was created on its own. The decision to use. Milton‘s title was unconscious, but fitting
Research led me to revisit Milton’s original work and significance. Milton’s most famous quotes again used for significance chosen after the fact.
Milton‘s Paradise Lost book one 1674 version (satan‘s defeat declaration famous quote
” better to rain in hell, than to serve in heaven”
Other worthy quotes
” the mind is its own place, and in itself\can make a heaven or hell,, a hell of heaven”
“awake arise, or be forever fallen,( Satan‘s rally and cry to the fallen angels( book 1)
“Long is the way and hard, that out of hell leads us to light”
spoken by the angelUriel book 2)
This type of poem
consist of five line stanza
is called a Quintetee