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Sparkle Sparkle , Little Star How Necessary you are

The desire to have our poem in the hierarchy

of the covenant first second and third spots

Ultimately, the top five for the month and

To rain Supreme the best poem of the year

A lofty goal all accolades voted by your peers

 

Achieving success is eupeptic

The shadow of your last win is where

Trepidation begins. Wanting to do it again,

Wanting more When is it enough?

Competition does not germinate commodity

Growing resentment divides in different ways

 

It starts off innocent yet bubbles festering inside

A little friendly competition never hurt anyone

But Do you give sparkles to your opponents?

Knowing that would put them ahead of you?

It’s different if you don’t have steak in the game

However, you must CHOOSE who to help WIN

 

It hurts Watching some of your best work

Crash and Burn near the bottom of the board

head held high chipped OFF my shoulder

Start again, I don’t write for the masses or do I

Dichotomy My fellow poets, I call friends

Green with envy licking wounds.mind turning

 

It sticks in my craw Who and Why do I write

Second-guessing my ability as a poet is hard

I know I’m not the only one that feels this way

Knocks me down a peg or two arrogant pride

Wild ride Difficult to accept Bruised EGO in tact

I eat humble pie why do I put myself through it?

 

It’s principles I write subjects that are taboo

Perhaps rather harsh if you really knew

When you’re reading it,it’s also reading you

I have a conviction Certain poems had to be said

Comment “you’re very brave saying it out loud”

I never gave any thought I just wrote it.

 

Sentiment out in the open, my Guff no longer full

First, I have to set my priorities in order

The strategy of winning a work of art

This poem is a Sestina

(6) six line stanzas 36 lines

Plus a three line envoy

Total poem 39 lines

 

Footnotes

In College the use of idioms Faux paws were not acceptable poetry and look upon as bad form.

However these seem so apropos I couldn’t resist the little twist to make a point. Since we believe in anything goes, I decided to break the rule.

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Written by
cj-sutherland
65 / F / U.S
Published
Apr 29
Lines·Words
45·377
Notes

Any poem with six lines is called a Sestet commonly has a rhyme scheme, but not required.

This poem is called a Sestina

( 6 ) Six lines stanzas (36 lines)

followed by a 3 line Envoy

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#competition#commodity#thebest#poetry#fair#play#popular
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