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The Receipt in My Pocket

(An ordinary receipt, doing a better job of keeping track of my life than I do.)

 

I found it by accident –

a small, crumpled record

of a day I apparently lived

without noticing.

It listed nothing remarkable:

coffee, bread,

a moment I must have walked through

on my way to somewhere else.

 

It had the date,

the time,

even the cashier’s name –

someone who greeted me

with a politeness

I must have returned

without thinking.

The total was modest.

The moment even more so.

Yet here it was,

surviving longer

than whatever thought

I was having at the time.

 

A thin strip of paper,

keeping better records

than my memory ever bothered to keep.

It knows the hour

I stood in a line,

the exact cost

of an ordinary afternoon.

Meanwhile I was thinking

about something else entirely –

tomorrow, perhaps,

or some small worry

that has already dissolved.

 

The receipt remembers

with perfect patience.

I’ve already forgotten the afternoon.

But the receipt

still knows

exactly

when it happened.

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Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
Mar 16
Lines·Words
41·171
Notes

A small reflection on how even the most ordinary objects keep traces of the moments we forget. A reminder that unnoticed minutes still belong to the life we’re living.

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