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full stop

and the sunlight dimmed with a rattle

and the woods made a bethel of their leaning

and the paths bowed because there is no such a thing as straight-forward

and we walked it sluggishly and insincerely

and the frith mourned god-fearingly for who had passed before

and dust hung pendant like the dots of our question marks

and the vessels tasted of bread and wine, which are the same

and they watched from the verge but had no eyes for it

and the tears of this path were older than breath

and we were allowed there only barely

and the snow came and the field opened itself

and the fence posts stood like exclamations

and those lights in the distance, tiny like punctuation...

and the night pressed its index on all until it flattened

and no trees offered shelter,

and no trees took it away

and the cold was a country with only one citizen at a time

and our trails were the only syntax this field would learn

and then even those were turned back to white

and the only dog was not barking and this mattered terribly,

and the frost made altars of the trenches and fire crackled in the kernel of winter wheat

and we stood there because to stand was the last verb left,

and it turned out that waiting itself was a form of architecture

and thresholds were the only forthright rooms

and nothing had to happen for everything to have already occurred

and patience was a physical thing you could drown in if you weren't careful

and careful was all we were and the world had been walked before

and the world had no record and the pastoral was just a test we'd failed by being gentle

and patience then filled our mouths and we'd forgotten how to swallow

and time was so slow it became a kind of weather

and we endured it until finally meaning flickered in the distance but never it approached

and we were grateful for this

and the ending was already there, standing in the trees, waiting for a cue

and we didn't mention it and it didn't mind

and the road kept curving and the field kept opening

and we kept not arriving, which was the point.

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Written by
giumbusluk
17
Published
Jan 18
Lines·Words
36·379
Notes

in search for a purgatory

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#existential#atheism#agnostic#language#nature
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