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dream womb

drop dusk and there lies sleep                dawning of dream vital within                         there's a nude throat of energy a body of landscape       and a primal language   sewn obscene oh here comes alike a monkey see lung as he preens       engorged tongues of mystery read thirstily read   fingertips retrieve        little fuckings from all surfaces all terrains and rearrangements                    of past furnishings lashed is all                                                   generous gobbings and ravishing demented in cementing and invasive warmth and decanting honey-clung vital ambrosia tightens and loosens human in ravel swallows of emerge and implosion of curtain                                     it passes til sistence                                     it passes with yawn
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neth-jones
Published
Sep 23, 2025
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15/05/25 & 04/08/25 mostly / previous versions : 09/01/25/at the dusk there/is sleep/but in the dawning of dream/there is nude and there is landscape/mandrake enemies are as welcome here/fears also human ravel and

09/01/25 with a nude throat of energy/channels demented the day/and stirred madly/it passes till sistence/read thirstily

VERSION 26/02/25 drop dusk and there's sleep/dawning of dream/and there is a nude throat of energy/there is body landscape/and language obscene of welcome mystery/demented warmth and rumble/human ravel read thirstily/it passes til sistence/it passes with yawn

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#surreal#dreams#landscape#birth#death#sex#sensations#climax
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