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Felt Like Rain

I do not know if it’s all illusion— but I adore when someone lies awake, eyes wide with dreams, tracing blades of grass, searching for me among flocks of white herons. I adore how someone falls in love with me while watching a deer—hair spilled wild, resting in pale blue light, waiting, almost breathless, for the hour of longing to end. And I adore it more when they listen for dew to learn if I have arrived; cradling a young hare, wondering if I, too, am restless; holding a white flower, smiling softly, gazing at swans and thinking of me. When rain falls they run outside just to feel me near. I love it— after the long day fades, or in the burnt stillness of afternoon, when they return, weary as a dove, and look for me— yes, I love it. May they remain like rainfall— gentle, everlasting, felt upon skin and soul.
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Written by
shoaib005
25 / M / Rangpur, Bangladesh
Published
Sep 20, 2025
Lines·Words
25·153
Tags
#longing#lovepoem#presence#waiting#sensorylove#natureinlove#dreamyromance#emotionalintimacy#eternalaffection#poeticsoul
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