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in every utter of my words, there's a existence of you
in every stutter of my words, the breath carries the name of you
your indelible eyes sparked something dangerous and wild
and i find myself floating on currents wild, with risk of drowning
but drowning in your eyes feels safer the mourning
mourning the loss of us that will come without warning
Written on- December 17, 2024; 6:00 pm
This poem is about the feeling of being scared of losing someone close you find solace with. Its dramatic with the use of line like "the breathe carries the name of you", which shows this poet's intentions towards this muse and how deeply i was into the idea of love.
Maanvinder Pilania
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Maanvinder Pilania  20/M/India
(20/M/India)   
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