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Grasping at straws

A poet writes

of the yellow brick Road to the Wizard of Oz

I’m grasping at straws

 

Poetry of substance Worthy of a cause

 

I’m Grasping at straws

I read poetry without flaws

 

I’m grasping at straws

Poetry so deep in content, I am in awe

 

I’m grasping at straws

Poetry so reflective I have to take a pause

 

Yet still I’m grasping at straws

 

This is more than writer’s block

My Acadian clock stopped

 

My brother passed away

I can’t find anything to say

Can’t breathe I cry and pray

 

Words betray my heart

Numb my brother and I apart

 

My Tears will stop life will be OK

I hope today would be a better day

 

I read poetry to fill the hole

Until grief, depression loss lets me go

Living moment, by moment is all I know

 

A rebel without a cause

I’m grasping at straws

 

Inspired song

 

Take this pain

By Jake Banfield 2022

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Written by
cj-sutherland
65 / F / U.S
Published
Aug 3, 2025
Lines·Words
28·157
Notes

I can’t seem to write anything of substance. My heart just isn’t in it. I read such inspiration epic poem. Trying to find my voice again. I’m not one who wants to write like somebody else. I may and I’m good at it. My brother was three years older than me Just saying that sentence has me in tears.

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#depression#writersblock#loss#empty#brotherdied
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