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Je t’invite dans mon jardin (I invite you into my garden)

by Aflame

The silence is not deafening, the flowers are not listening to my hushed soliloquy - and so I speak; I only ask for an ounce, but I yearn for more bouts of domestic felicity. It's not some grand wish, no mere flight of fancy - only a gentle plea for an interlude from the monotone blur of days. At first, it sounds so very twee: layered harmonies and classical strings, like an echo of Vivaldi's "Spring" But Pomme asks, "Pourquoi j’y pense encore? Y a quoi de mieux avant?" Why do I still think about it? What was there that was better before? In an earlier verse, I was slowly singing towards my dirge.
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Aflame
29 / F / New Zealand
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Written by
Aflame
29 / F / New Zealand
Published
Jul 22, 2025
Lines·Words
35·114
Notes

If this resonated with you, I gently recommend exploring Pomme’s music. I personally love her album "Saisons" xxxx

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#poetry#gentleplea#domesticity#nostalgia#frenchlyrics#pomme#longing#softgrief#reflection#quietresistance
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