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#domesticity
The silence is not deafening, the flowers are not listening to my hushed soliloquy - and so I speak; I only ask for an ounce, but I yearn for more bouts of domestic felicity. It's not some grand wish, no mere flight of fancy - only a gentle plea for an interlude from the monotone blur of days. At first, it sounds so very twee: layered harmonies and classical strings, like an echo of Vivaldi's "Spring" But Pomme asks, "Pourquoi j’y pense encore? Y a quoi de mieux avant?" Why do I still think about it? What was there that was better before? In an earlier verse, I was slowly singing towards my dirge.
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Jul 22, 2025
Jul 22, 2025 at 12:22 AM UTC
Je t’invite dans mon jardin (I invite you into my garden)
Cured salmon glistening between thick seeded slices. Three plump tomatoes. Like castle guards. I watch in awe: my toes poke through knitted holes in the blanket, fleshy moles. Nan pushes in The Thornbirds VHS and she rambles about the birds going west. She says: ‘I’m glad I can stay here and not fly anywhere.’ cosy and safe. Nan places another fleece blanket on me. We drink dark hot cocoa and watch birds from the sofa
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Nov 28, 2020
Nov 28, 2020 at 11:26 AM UTC
Two Birds Happy to be Flightless
Domestic life, wouldn’t it be nice, wine in hand, topped with ice. Your hair shining ginger in the sun, at the BBQ, loading sausages in buns as our son screams and trips over. Twice! On Thursday we lounge and eat egg-fried rice, all we do is laugh and you say: 'This is Paradise.' Then we shout over cake, it’s overdone! Domestic life. You see my tears and hug me, feels nice. You’re still the man with the best advice. So take me to Harvester, just for fun, then we talk in funny voices to our sweet son. Let’s drink more wine we bought half price. Domestic life.
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Apr 28, 2020
Apr 28, 2020 at 5:17 PM UTC
Life Begins in Suburbia
I do not understand Why he sabotaged me so consummately, And made me look like Such a pathetic old patsy, Could he not discern the misery He was shoring up by degrees, Over the course of the years For the self he would ultimately be? It was perforce a former version of me, Who led me to this place Of near-incessant mourning, A narcissistic anomaly, Who never wanted the precious gifts Of peace and domesticity, The little ones that might have been, He spirited them all away from me.
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Jul 10, 2019
Jul 10, 2019 at 9:15 AM UTC
This Place of Near-Incessant Mourning
stepford wife, smile bright cook, clean, fix, listen, shine a trophy, prize, conquest overused, underloved, broken, dies unassembled puzzle, incomplete pieces an unclear fit, break silent muzzled, scattered, quit exhausted, out is in a box for puzzles, games, like little talk brought to shelved bars, stay viewed only, never touched succumb, suffocate, decay
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Jul 17, 2018
Jul 17, 2018 at 5:25 PM UTC
Resistance
The relentless clock ticks like a pseudo heartbeat, prattling platitudes of sententious pity. Two decades summons pragmatism: a mouth to kiss, a place to eat, to **** and shove like lambing ewe. Set it in stone at twenty-five; a diamond glares from Facebook, a Gorgon eye, a quick click analgesic. Marry overborne bricks and surrender nature’s piquancy to kitchens where flies **** on all the dinners not savoured. Probe for passion in drains, Tupperware, between stale sheets. Aridity resists fornication in a ***** for absent frisson; a stretch across oceans, portenous as premature world-weary yawns, Three syllables ought to roll easily yet sear acidic, two tongues curtailed and bourne back into silence.
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Jul 8, 2018
Jul 8, 2018 at 5:20 AM UTC
Dry.
Three syllables should roll easy, yet sear acidic the tongue, refusing formation of empty expression. The sun shines no brighter than the struggling bedside light, and rivers flow no fresher than saliva leaked in sleep. The malodour of rank roses drifts from every kitchen, where flies **** on dishes of all the dinners not savoured. Inside we search for desire; in drains, under beds, between stale sheets.  The arid well resists fornication as we ***** for absent frisson, the floral miasma lingering, as if to scoff.
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Jul 4, 2018
Jul 4, 2018 at 3:30 AM UTC
Mimetic desire.
I want to live in a big house In the middle of a big town And in my big house In the middle of a big town I want to bake biscuits in my big kitchen And feed them to my friends Who come to visit my big house In the middle of a big town
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Jul 4, 2018
Jul 4, 2018 at 12:30 AM UTC
House
My Baby's gone fishing I hope he catches himself a treat For us both to eat And when he comes back home I'll make him a meal Of bread and butter
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Apr 2, 2018
Apr 2, 2018 at 5:30 PM UTC
Gone Fishing
Have you been shredded By the tenacity Of your alcoholism Yet, Or will we have to funnel More worldly atrocities Into you, Filling you to bursting? The swish in your belly, The boldness of your talk; Decimated. Let me be the one To **** all you are With my well-kept home And all-American children. Let me poison you With my son and husband's baseball game, My seasonal dish towels. Let me tear your being With my baby Who doesn't even suffer a diaper rash, With my laundered and ironed clothes. Let me destroy you in domesticity, A cold beer at the end of the day And too many addictions Kept hidden. Let me dismantle your establishment While I bear my blemishes under the skin. Let me break your concentration. Let me make you think I am perfect. Let me make you think That my family is sound. Let me convince you That you mean nothing To the world If only because My children will be more intelligent and more well kept Than the one you poisoned. Let me be The Stephen King novel, Bruce Springsteen song, All-American house wife And let me be kept far, Far away from You, Dazed and Confused And depressed and medicated, You.
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May 11, 2016
May 11, 2016 at 4:07 PM UTC
All-American (The Bruce Springsteen Kind)
You finally roll over, after downing the remainder of the wine you said you’d share with me and lay the bottle to rest beside the bed, in a graveyard of clutter I periodically nag you to tidy up so now I can finally assure myself with more than tenuous trust that you will not confirm your gazing over my shoulder at my laptop screen with that irritating ******* chuckle when you see whatever I’m privately trying to enjoy for myself because now it would make more sense that I’m doing anything other than typing, typing furiously about how I can’t articulate why I’ve admitted you into my bed. Why we mutually burn through seasons of wasted time on Netflix, and instinctively, someone’s head falls within the soft hollow of another’s shoulder, yet I cringe the moment you reach over to make the embrace intentional and why when the remnants of the drunken, desperate stumbling to my then celibate bed that spawned what we can’t seem to finish have long dissipated, do we insist on carrying our dead within us and why once you turn back and see me, do you retreat to the living room to strum hopelessly on the Les Paul you spent too much money on and had shipped to my apartment because you barely spend any time at yours, as I type this groggy and reaching for what’s as reachable as mist with only a room between us, separately we decode the repercussions of being haphazard nomads somehow assigned to civilization.
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Aug 31, 2015
Aug 31, 2015 at 7:46 PM UTC
"An Accidental Commitment"
It pains me, a bit to think about the possibilities of life if you were here, if I could watch your smile bloom upon your face see the signs of laughter brewing just after I’ve said something silly. I’d cook you dinner and blush with happiness when you teased me for my utter lack of skill and after you would make hot cocoa for our movie marathon and we’d have punch drunk discussions on the philosophy of psychopathic ****** for dessert. While the credits rolled your eyes would droop and your head, heavy with sleep would rest sweetly on my shoulder. Would I kiss you, then? Softly, so as not to ruin the mood? Or fierce and biting with the breaking of long-held restraint? Would you invite me to your bed? And if you did, would I accept? Or would I stroke your hair and kiss you a gentle goodnight at your bedroom door? Would we grow old together, counting wrinkles as they form, marking the days with ridiculous anniversaries: first kiss, first fight, first joint bout of pyromania? Or would it end, perish early like so many things are wont to do? Would you die first? Or would I? And when we were gone would we have anyone to tell stories about us and the crazy things we no doubt said and did? Would I ever tell you this poem was about you? Maybe. Maybe, if you were here, I could.
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Jun 8, 2015
Jun 8, 2015 at 12:00 PM UTC
If You Were Here
After the dust settled, the mess tidied; they ate peacefully.
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May 24, 2015
May 24, 2015 at 8:49 AM UTC
Peace Meal (10w)
We are both struggling to get breath in, laying next to each other in bed; Your snores are loud and could shake the walls while I'm just choking on my thoughts The blue of the room reminds me of the blue of the waves I am obsessed with, and how I want to put them permanently on everything, even myself My feet are warmed by a small dog who doesn't move unless he wants to, and I'm afraid to disturb anyone in this fairly domestic dreamland Do you know I write poems at one A.M.?
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Mar 30, 2015
Mar 30, 2015 at 12:48 AM UTC
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Oct 23, 2014
Oct 23, 2014 at 4:34 PM UTC
PSYCHO-PHARMA-LOGIC
I knew the orange on the orange tree you had an ache in your shoulders uncomfortable in an unnatural way yesterday I passed you talking to flowers you hadn't moved you hadn't strayed but hiding in the leaves was a forced disguise the omens told me something quiet and unceasing reminding me of a slumbering domesticated cat dreaming of cutting yourself loose from truncated ease dropping down from the branch with panther steps licking fruit lips ripe with revealed acidic petals riddled with a past you revelled mixing in with zest shocking chances stepped in for the next dance sleep taken aback by wings cut from a dark sky the sidewalk pitted and cracked beneath the pounce relief escaped the twigs with a spring like waking prey pressing into night foliage shaken from a nice balance as I saw you take control with nothing to mask your face on the surface too smooth for violence was laughter of glowing gloom to embarrass and deter such rebellious arrogance with a twist struggling from a lame curse its flavours sharp against your sweetened perfume muscle expecting you to build a limestone shed for tears rather than take on the night with a mind to wrestle the outside aches for your physical attraction gaining courage from the purpose in your eyes tense as the tightness of your dress' intention demanding that my hands draw from such lines the sinuous heat of pulsing flesh's invitation curved upon seeds not chaste but not quite refined which I try not loving with some cool disambiguation you left me the taste of syrup of grenadine too reputable to ripple vain red tipple eyed on a table spilt with pink gin and mandarin sharp teeth tingling a tartness into my hand sliding slowly at a tilt like drops of sweat on skin focus dwindling into the clasp of an escaping shade wrapped carefully under soft rice paper and then tucked under a heel with a pointed kick like a blade only to feel you relent and burst open soft in appeal again and again
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Jul 19, 2014
Jul 19, 2014 at 3:28 PM UTC
Orange Drops
I knew the orange on the orange tree you had an ache in your shoulders uncomfortable in an unnatural way yesterday I passed you talking to flowers you hadn't moved you hadn't strayed but hiding in the leaves was a forced disguise the omens told me something quiet and unceasing reminding me of a slumbering domesticated cat dreaming of cutting yourself loose from truncated ease dropping down from the branch with panther steps licking fruit lips ripe with revealed acidic petals riddled with a past you revelled mixing in with zest shocking chances stepped in for the next dance sleep taken aback by wings cut from a dark sky the sidewalk pitted and cracked beneath the pounce relief escaped the twigs with a spring like waking prey pressing into night foliage shaken from a nice balance as I saw you take control with nothing to mask your face on the surface too smooth for violence was laughter of glowing gloom to embarrass and deter such rebellious arrogance with a twist struggling from a lame curse its flavours sharp against your sweetened perfume muscle expecting you to build a limestone shed for tears rather than take on the night with a mind to wrestle the outside aches for your physical attraction gaining courage from the purpose in your eyes tense as the tightness of your dress' intention demanding that my hands draw from such lines the sinuous heat of pulsing flesh's invitation curved upon seeds not chaste but not quite refined which I try not loving with some cool disambiguation you left me the taste of syrup of grenadine too reputable to ripple vain red tipple eyed on a table spilt with pink gin and mandarin sharp teeth tingling a tartness into my hand sliding slowly at a tilt like drops of sweat on skin focus dwindling into the clasp of an escaping shade wrapped carefully under soft rice paper and then tucked under a heel with a pointed kick like a blade only to feel you relent and burst open soft in appeal again and again
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