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Shin
Poems
Nov 2013
young man in a pocket
my young love was named after me.
in an abstract filled of pleasure
we sought ecstasy but it's dead.
now i don't think i can be free.
the one i loved looked oh so sad.
as someone who's lost their treasure.
or a father who's own son bled
his last words were: "i love you dad"
despite all this we may be free
to live out with no more pressure,
the joys of life as god has fled
dropping his attack; I am me.
Written by
Shin
30/M/Chicago
(30/M/Chicago)
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