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6d
when i am so far down
  that my troubles are blue
  no lower to sink
  i'm just as troubled as you
                                            
  as i look all around
  i soak up the rays
  you stand right behind me
  right there you stay                        
  
  i hurt on the inside
  and you have got none
  flat on the pavement
  having no fun.
  
  i'm just the figure that cast
  you are left beside                      
  so dismal we feel
  distressed and combined                      
    
  we're faulty and fragile
  too troubled to guide
  we move to the darkness
  so contrast can hide
                          
  just cause i hurt
  does not mean
  that you deserve                      
  feeling no worth
  just to observe
My first complete poem ever. Written 20+ years ago and unedited.  IDK it's kinda cute?
Craig Strong
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Craig Strong  48/M/United States
(48/M/United States)   
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