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My Life in Others' Eyes

My Life is seen as a mess In reality, it is as organized as can be People always use their minds To double-check what they see I have never tried to hurt anyone But when they think about myself, they ruin me My Life is like trash, some say To me, it's a beautiful display People cut me down all the time But my eyes tell me what always rhymes It looks like my mental state made a disappearance To me, My Life had never been an interference I always felt the need to please others, it lifts you in the air But for someone like me, you feel self-aware Now, I'm stuck here, breaking the fourth wall As I type this out, and speak to you all No matter what the time, day, and place The world feels like a runner in a race People will pass you, for a short, little while But don't let that get to you, just think, compile Once you learn to accept that, all becomes clear That it wasn't your mental state that began to disappear So let people pass you, let them reach the finish first But don't let your knowledge in that race disperse You can speak in riddles or speak in rhymes but just remember, its a matter of time Please think about this, as I get to your head Let this poem help you, and let you rest in your bed For that is what matters now, don't forget it Once this skill is learned, you can be omnipresent
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17 / M / United States
Published
Dec 13, 2024
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#teen#sad#rhyme#pain#love#hope#adult
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