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Nov 4
Life is like candy
You first must open the wrapper
Then get the sweets inside
And when it's all over
All the different layers and phases
You die
Most people get stuck on step 1
And unfortunately then skip to 3
But to get number two
You have to be more than lucky
Open the candy wrapper

Feedback appreciated ❤️❤️
Liana
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Liana  F/NJ/in my mind
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