the house waited for him like the faithful dog he had not got
"Hello...hello!" said the house smiling with all of itself
"Welcome!" said the mat his own home at last the silence filled up with his footsteps
"Read me...no read me!" the books on his shelves argued amongst themselves
made himself a G&T watched the sunset like it was TV
slowly the night crept through the house found him asleep in the chair
he startled awake saw her smiling at him from an old photo
he turned the photo face down. . .a tear ran into the edge of his moustache
"And all for nothing..." he told himself "...all for nothing!"
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I never got to see this fabulous house. I met him in a pub and we just fell into talking...then he'd have to get a train back to Manchester to "my house!" But somehow the house in words was greater than any house he could show me. He was Greek and would always tell me that his wife was "the King of my house!" Because his English was not good( learnt from movies )he had picked up the King of Siam's "etc., etc., etc." phrase in order to fill in the thoughts suggested but unavailable to him in words. Every time I see this fabulous film I remember him and how his wife was "the King of my house and my heart!" The big dream was to own his own home. Then he got married and his wife died in childbirth so now the big dream( ever since he was a little kid )was here but....empty.
I prefer the "not knowing" in the poem. The elements in the poem are the delight in having the dream house and then for the sorrow and the emptiness you have to imagine the rest...asking the reader to complete the poem with their imagination. An air of mystery...suffice it to say...something soul destroying has happened but the wondering what it is...is...another poem.